Wanting to grow up so fast, married by the age of 19 with a husband and an apartment with coffee-stained ceilings. Honestly, what the hell was she thinking? The world was at the tips of her fingers...
She would be giving her life away, letting someone else make the decisions for her, and she was not that kind of girl. What does a person really know about themselves when they're still in baby diapers?
Then it finally hit her, she needed to give life a chance and really start living. Date other potential husband candidates, she would find the one.
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She was 19. All of 19 years old. Should she get married? was it a solemn vow or a cobweb in her mind? She could live her life, and she could be uncertain about it. May be, just may be, there was somebody else, a chance encounter perhaps, waiting to happen. And time, she could afford to spend. Remember, she was only 19.
I think you can go further with this story, Laura, in terms of world-building. There is some repetition here, which if eliminated would allow the character to contemplate the specific reasons she needs out of the marriage.
Nitpicky: Do you need "with a husband" if you've already told us she's married?
"Then it finally hit her, she needed to give life a chance and really start living. Date other potential husband candidates, she would find the one" think this part needs expansion it doesn't fit into the story this way. Maybe say why it hit her or something?