Courtney came down the stairs like it was Christmas morning. She was young, attractive, with a face full of freckles and shoulders to match. She was going to ruin my life.
“Welcome to NashVegas! Want a beer?”
“Is wrestling fixed?”
“The kitchen’s this way…I’ll give you the dime tour.”
She had very small breasts, and was wearing a striped tube top that she was constantly pulling up. It was a poor choice for a girl with that kind of figure, but she seemed to manage it well. And besides, all that tugging was really doing it for me.
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Ok I love this line:
"She was young, attractive, with a face full of freckles and shoulders to match. She was going to ruin my life." That says so much...
The dialogue is a little confusing for me, because it feels like a series of non sequitor. The last line is great, really tells a lot about the narrator.