Horse Lust

"Aw cookies!", Sharon said as she tried to clarify what it was about the man on the TV that bugged her. Was it the hair? The flashing polka-dot bow tie. Or was it that this oversized mustache that passed for a man was mooning over the quality of his wife’s breasts?

Just then Sharon's eyes blurred. The mustache became a horse galloping through a star-filled sky. She could feel the huffing beast between her legs and she could see Auriga the Charioteer beckoning downward into the night sky.

As her vision cleared she thought, the mustache, definitely the mustache.

Written over 1 year ago
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4 Notes

Barry over 1 year ago

Welcome to Scrawlers, afarrell30.

What an unusual first story. I like that. We need more unusual stories. Thanks for bringing visions and constellations into the Scrawlers fold!

afarrell30 responded over 1 year ago

Thank you Barry. I love this and can't ead more from you and others.

Samiam over 1 year ago

Is this Andrew? If so, hi Andrew from Sam. If not, glad tidings to you too.

Enjoyable story, by the way.

afarrell30 responded over 1 year ago

'Tis me, Sammy. Thanks for turning me on to this. It is awesome.

Samiam over 1 year ago

I'm still laughing about this two days after I first read it. "Aw cookies" is such a great opening.

mattliadan over 1 year ago

"She could feel the huffing beast between her legs" is a powerful way to start a sentence! Lord knows I kept reading.

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