Stories

Poetic Gold (6 months ago)

Stories Written By a Man (8 months ago)

Sudden Depth (about 1 year ago)

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The Receipt (about 1 year ago)

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The Secret Lives of Platypi (about 1 year ago)

Book Club (about 1 year ago)

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Small Dreams (about 1 year ago)

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Chocolate Gorge (about 1 year ago)

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Behind the Door (about 1 year ago)

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Learning (about 1 year ago)

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The Surprise in the Bedroom by kikarose

The four one-word sentences feed the tone; they're short and syncopated, lending themselves to being ... (6 months ago)

Turning in place by BillTaichi

I feel like this piece is getting at the wolf-like hunt in a game of attraction, as sanmiguel points ... (6 months ago)

Kicking those snow gobs by classicme

For some reason, I picture adult children with their mother, but that's just me as the reader puttin ... (6 months ago)

Nashville by sanmiguel

The dialogue is a little confusing for me, because it feels like a series of non sequitor. The last ... (6 months ago)

Boy by Emily87

And it does tie together in the end, nice circular wording! The voice is consistent and I can still ... (8 months ago)

Playing cat and mouse by kikarose

Solid tone, fun personification. Details like "the bushes rustled in the wind" work, and I have a lo ... (8 months ago)

Locker Room. by Auraji

"Nice arms" is a nice detail - tells us something about the narrator, what they notice in someone. I ... (8 months ago)

Follow These Steps: by Auraji

I like the step-by-step process, and the Japanese call-words proceeding each bit. You had me until " ... (8 months ago)

The Break Up by Laura

I think you can go further with this story, Laura, in terms of world-building. There is some repeti ... (9 months ago)

Rewind by moffingh

Neat backward storytelling. Does Scott do this just to spite his mother? His motivations aren't cl ... (9 months ago)